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Transformers Prime 27, 2nd season (2-й сезон), транскрипт, заготовка для субтитров.
BFFs — "best friends forever", сленговая аббревиатура.
Head honcho — "голова", "главный", шеф, командир (неформальн. амер, от яп. "hancho" — " лидер группы").
In hindsight we accomplished what was required. With Unicron's awakening, extreme measures needed to be taken. Enemies became allies, allies became confidants. And, with the Matrix of Leadership, the planet Earth was saved. Though at immeasurable personal cost... When Optimus surrendered the Matrix he'd lost more than the collective wisdom of the Primes.
- Who are they?
- Our mortal enemies!
- ...He lost himself.читать дальше
- That doesn't follow up. Optimus knew Megatron.
- They were like BFFs!
- If Optimus did not know his own name, perhaps it is because the title of Prime hasn't yet been granted to him.
- Huh?
- What?
- Say again?
- With the power of the Matrix no longer within him, it would stand to reason that Optimus has reverted to his pre-Prime state: the historical archivist, Orion Pax.
- You mean, in his mind.
- Are you telling me Prime thinks he is some kind of librarian?? and a Decepticon?!
- Attention, crew. Our guest is currently in isolation, to help ease his transition. Upon Orion Pax emergence, he is to be shown every courtesy. And the first to address him as "Optimus Prime" will have their voice-box torn out.
- Lord Megatron. Is it wise, to allow an Autobot, current or former, full run of the premises?
- Nothing happens aboard this ship without my knowledge. You would do well to remember that, Airachnid. But there's no need for concern. Orion does not possess the same fight Optimus is so renown for.
- Then what use is he to our Cause?
- Ah, rest assured, Orion Pax will indeed earn his stripes.
- Welcome back to the winning team.
- Being a Decepticon is a _choice_, Agent Fowler. One I have a hard time believing Optimus would make at any point in his life.
- So, if he's riding with the 'Cons...
- ...it's because Megatron is working some kind of voodoo.
- Orion Pax may not currently be an Autobot up here, but I must believe he will never stop being one, in _here_. We must locate him to know for certain.
- Hold up. I have a chip lodged in my behind to let Uncle Sam know, would I stop for doughnuts. Are you telling me you can't just track Prime?
- Optimus's signal has not reappeared since he embarked for Earth's core. But we must get to work finding him. If we have any hope of initiating his contingency plan.
- ...contingency plan?
- What "contingency"?
- Is that even a word?
- The Key card! So, what does it do?
- It grants access to Vector Sigma, the repository of the wisdom of the Primes.
- Is that some sort of supercomputer?
- So, we can just download Optimus's memories back into him? Great! Which one is the big V? over here? somewhere in back?
- Vector Sigma is more than a "supercomputer", Jack. It is an ancient source of mystical power. On Cybertron.
- You had been a captive of the Autobots and locked in stasis for quite some time, Orion. Long enough for us to be in exodus on another world.
- Exodus? Why?
- Because the Warlord Ratchet's careless actions led to this.
- Ohh... Cybertron!
- Jackson Durby! You will NOT be travelling to another planet.
- I'm in!
- You're not going either, Miko. Not while one of you can.
- June's right. Why send a boy to do a bot's job?
- Because only a Prime can access Vector Sigma. Or one chosen by a Prime. Optimus gave the Key card to Jack. It is now imprinted with his unique biosignature.
- So, you mean Jack is like some kind of honorary Prime?
- Let's just say Jack is the only one who can return Optimus to the Autobot we knew.
- But why would Optimus willfully endanger a human? A child?
- I'm not a child, Mom!
- Maybe Optimus believes there's more to Jack than meets the eye?
- All of which is moot. The Key-card is useless to us without the means of reaching Cybertron, which we at present do not possess.
- Dude. What about _that_?
- Miko, the Ground bridge barely got them into Earth orbit, remember?
- Yeah, but Ratchet built it. Can't you just turbo-charge the thing?
- I cannot believe Ratchet capable of such horrors.
- Yes. And to think the Doctor of Doom's mad quest for power continues... His marauders pursued us to this planet's orbit. We feel its species are not ready to behold us. But we have resolved to protect this world from the same tragedy which was dealt to our own.
- One question, Megatron. Why are we called Decepticons?
- Another craven Autobot scare tactic. The name was meant to demonize us. Instead, we wear it as a badge of honour. For if speaking the truth is deception — then we are gladly guilty. Now please, Orion. There will be plenty of time for catching up. You must rest.
- Megatron! I will do my part to stop Ratchet's unspeakable crimes of aggression. This I vow. With all my Spark.
- It seems we have successfully achieved control of Orion's spark. Now, to put his mind to work. Have you sanitized the data-core? Excellent. Our new archivist would require unlimited access to our files. It would be counterproductive for him to stumble upon any sensitive information.
- Two "body slamburger" specials. Enjoy!
- Hey, Jack!
- Sierra!
- How come I never see you around?
- What are you talking about? We have chemistry together. Erm, I mean "class"! Chemistry class.
- I mean, outside of school. I never see you at any parties or at the mall.
- Well, mostly I'm here wearing the hat. And you never can study too hard for the OVCT, you know. And, there's some other... stuff. Oh. Don't go anywhere!
- Welcome to K.O. drive-in, may I take your...
- Five p.m., Jack, your shift is over. Let's go.
- Oh. _That_ kind of "stuff".
- Sierra, wait! ...She is my mother!
- Your Mom looks good in leather. On your bike.
- Did not mean to decimate your social life.
- Not the first time. Any sign of Optimus?
- Not today.
- Not yet!
- When we stormed the Iacon Hall of Records in the winning days of the war for Cybertron, we acquired highly classified files. Files written with Autobot codes which we had been not able to decypher.
- Autobot codes which the Iacon archivist Orion Pax should have no trouble cracking. Considering what's at stake, shouldn't we beef up the security around here?
- Knockout, I believe that Orion will perform most effectively if he does not feel threatened or confined in any way. However, it is no coincidence that Orion's work-station is located in direct proximity to the energon storage vault.
- Which is under constant surveillance... Well-played.
- Ratchet! Are you turbo-charging the Ground-bridge?
- Tinkering. No need to get anyone's hopes up, just yet.
- Orion! How fares project "Iacon"?
- I am a bit rusty, I fear. I've only managed to decode three entries.
- And what do these entries comprise?
- They were logged by Autobot archivist during the war after I entered stasis. My only knowledge of its content so far is that they are coordinates, targeting locations on this very planet. I surmise that they could indicate hiding places for vessels shuttled from Cybertron for safe-keeping.
- Such as historical documents or cultural artefacts?..
- My greatest fear would be weapons of mass destruction. Hidden away for later use.
- All the more reason it is essential we do everything in our power to keep said vessels from Autobot reach. We are fortunate to have you on our side, Orion Pax.
- Lord Megatron. I am puzzled by one particular finding. I have discovered several historic references to Starscream as your second-in-command. Yet I have not seen him aboard the ship.
- Sadly, Commander Starscream is dead.
- Orion has many questions. Valuable trait in an archivist but not in the Decepticon. It is a matter of time before he unravels all our fabrications and his innate sense of right and wrong rises to the surface... I only hope that Orion would complete project "Iacon" before I am forced to destroy him, once and for all.
- Ratchet! You awake? This is an emergency!
- Agent Fowler! Is it Optimus?
- It's 'Cons! They're busting into same military research lab they had two months ago.
- Another Space-bridge?
- And for all we know Optimus is riding with them.
- Roll out!
- Drop the power source!
- Aren't you missing someone?
- Ready for that bridge! We'll be sure to tell the big O you said "hello".
- Arcee!
- Scrap.
- Where's Optimus? Answer me!
- What?!
- Arcee... Allow me to welcome her aboard.
- No! If Orion so much as lays eyes on another Autobot let alone be allowed to witness its destruction, everything he currently believes will be called into question. See to it that Arcee is escorted off this ship immediately!
- Orion! Please return to your station. Lord Megatron's orders.
- I heard a commotion.
- What the?
- You weren't able to determine the Decepticons' location or if Optimus was even aboard ship?
- I... couldn't confirm.
- Bulkhead!
- What? You needed that? Only thing I need is our head honcho back!
- It's not your fault.
- If any of us needed rescuing Optimus would have found a way. I didn't. Simple as that.
- Ratchet! What happened out there? Reports indicate at least a dozen wounded. The hits on me to provide some explanation. You bots better get back together or the Pentagon would make me shut down your base.
- But, where would you go?
- Who knows. Maybe they'll ship us out to some island or fire us into space! What might be a welcome relief.
- I don't blame Fowler! Optimus would have evacuated all humans in the area before engaging the 'Cons.
- We don't actually know what Optimus would have done because he's not here!
- You're pretty good at stating the obvious, Bulk. Anything else you'd like to mention that we already know?
- Nothing I can say in front of the children.
- Hey, hey! Aren't we overlooking one positive? Nobody's talking about what the 'Cons just got their claws on.
- Yes, we managed to allow them to finally acquire a power source for their space bridge!
- And how exactly that would be a positive?
- We let them finish building their Space-bridge.
- Why? So they can bring more zombies back from Cybertron?
- No. So we can come and gear it. And use it to send ME to Cybertron.
- Wow. That's a pretty good idea.
- Oh well. If _Miko_ thinks it's a good idea...
- Nobody saying it would be easy but you've seized the Space-bridge before!
- We blew one up. That's a whole lot different drift of seizing one AND holding one.
- Bee is right. We have to find that thing first.
- Hellooo! If it's a _space_ bridge, isn't it..?
- The term "space" refers to its transport range, not its physical location. We'd been monitoring Earth orbit since the last one, we'd know if one were there.
- So, the Bridge could be somewhere right here on Earth?
- Like trying to find a servo ... in a scrapyard.
- Then maybe we better start looking.
- But the fact remains: we do not know what the Decepticons have in store for Optimus. Or if he's truly safe from harm.
- Starscream!
- That's "Commander Starscream". What's your malfunction? Lower those weapons immediately.
- I'm sorry, Sir, but Lord Megatron ordered that you be taken into custody should you ever return to the ship.
- What? Clearly, there has been a mistake.
- No! Optimus Prime?!
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I've just finished going through the episode and the subs. There were a couple minor quibbles, but I don't think someone who wasn't looking for them would have noticed (with just one or two exceptions). Here's the full list but most of them are small.
::31 - “He’d lost more than the collective wisdom...” - It may just be me, but I’m hearing it as “He lost more than...” rather than “He’d”. Very minor issue either way.
::47 - “That doesn’t follow up.” - Arcee didn’t say “up”. She just said “That doesn’t follow.”
::1:21 - “You mean you think he’s some kind of Librarian?? and a Decepticon?!” Minor gramatical issue here, but I think the “And” would be capitalized.
::1:29 “Upon Orion Pax emergence,” - Megatron actually says “But when Orion Pax emerges,”
::2:02 “But then what use is he to our Cause?” - I’m not positive, but I don’t believe “Cause” should be capitalized.
::3:33 “But I must believe he will never stop he will being one, in _here_. Two things. THe comma after “one” is unneeded. The second part, is that a sсript thing my subtitles are having trouble reading? The dashes for _here_ I mean. It looks a little odd.
::3:43 “I have a chip lodged in my behind to let Uncle Sam know, would I stop for donuts.” It should read, “I have a chip lodged in my behind that lets Uncle Sam know when I stop for donuts.”
::4:22 “So which one’s the big V? over here? somewhere in back?” Sentences should be capitalized.
::5:18 “Jackson Durby!” Official materials spell his name “Jackson Darby.”
::5:24 “Not when one of YOU can.” She says “Not while one of YOU can.”
::5:46 “So, you mean Jack is like some kind of honorary Prime?” THis is such a minor thing I feel guilty about bringing it up, but I think Miko’s words would be best transcribed as “So, you mean Jack’s like some kinda honorary Prime?” It’s an incredibly minor difference, but the slang uses fit Miko’s character more.
::6:01 “Maybe Optimus believe there’s more to Jack than meets the eye?” Another incredibly minor one, but I don’t believe the intonation in Arcee’s voice indicates that it’s a question. I’d do without the question mark.
::6:16 “Dude, what about _that_” There’s those _things_ again.
::8:03 “Our new archivist would require unlimited access....” Megatron says “Our new archivist will require unlimited access...”
::8:22 “Hey, Jack!” I think the comma isn’t needed there.
::8:47 “And you can never study too hard for the OVCT, you know.” He actually says “And you can never study too hard for the old SATs you know.” The SATs are the US standardized testing (and totally useless).
::8:57 “Five p.m., Jack, your shift is over.” I think this would best be rendered into English as “5 PM Jack. Your shift is over.”
::9:01 _That_ kind of... “stuff.” Indeed Sierra. _That_ kind.
::9:10 “She is my mother.” Another minor one, “She’s my mother.”
::9:26 “Did not mean to decimate your social life.” Better read “Didn’t mean to...”
::9:37 “When we stormed the Iacon.... in the winning days of the war for Cybertron,” It should be, “in the waning days...”
::9:46 “Files written with Autobot codes, which we had been not able to decypher”. Decipher is spelled wrong. In addition, it should read, ...”which we had been unable to decipher.”
::10:24 “Which is under constant surveillance... Well-Played.” I believe it should read “Well played.” Without the dash.
::11:34 “Such as, historical documents or cultural artefacts?” Artifacts is misspelled.
::12:32 “Orion has many questions.” It should read, “Orion asks many questions”.
::12:36 “Valuable trait in an archivist, but not in the Decepticon.” Should be “A valuable trait in an archivist, but not in a Decepticon.”
::12:41 “It is a matter of time before he unravels all our fabrications” Should be “It is a matter of time before he unravels our fabrications”
::12:53 “I only hope that Orion would complete project Iacon” Should be “I only hope that Orion will complete project Iacon”
::13:13 “And for all we know Optimus is riding with them.” I listened to it a couple times, and I’m pretty sure Arcee says “But for all we know”
::15:34 “See to it that Arcee is escorted out of this ship immediately.” Should be “See to it that Arcee is escorted off this ship immediately.”
::17:35 “The hits on me to provide some explanation.” Fowler says “The heats on me to provide...”
::17:39 “You bots better get back together or the Pentagon would make me shut down your base.” He says “You bots better get your act together or the Pentagon will make me shut down your base.”
::17:48 “What might be a welcome relief.” Ratchet says “Wouldn’t that be a welcome relief.”
::18:31 “No. So we can come and gear it.” He’s saying “No. So we can commandeer it.”
::18:37 “Wow. That’s a pretty good idea.” Miko again. She says “Woah.” Not “wow.”
::18:41 “If _Miko_ thinks it’s a good idea.” You tell her, _Arcee_.
::18:45 “Nobody is saying it would be easy.” Jack says “Nobody is saying it will be easy.”
::18:49 “We blew one up. That’s a whole different drift of seizing AND holding one.” Oh no! Drift is trying to muscle in on Prime! Bulkhead says “That’s a whole lot different than seizing AND holding one.”
::18:55 “Bee is right.” I think “Bee’s right.”
::19:07 “And we’d been monitoring Earth orbit since the last one, we’d know if that were there.” I think there’s a couple errors here, and would be better written “And we’ve been monitoring Earth’s orbit since the last one, we’d know if it were there.
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Transformers Prime 27, 2nd season (2-й сезон), транскрипт, заготовка для субтитров.
BFFs — "best friends forever", сленговая аббревиатура.
Head honcho — "голова", "главный", шеф, командир (неформальн. амер, от яп. "hancho" — " лидер группы").
In hindsight we accomplished what was required. With Unicron's awakening, extreme measures needed to be taken. Enemies became allies, allies became confidants. And, with the Matrix of Leadership, the planet Earth was saved. Though at immeasurable personal cost... When Optimus surrendered the Matrix he'd lost more than the collective wisdom of the Primes.
- Who are they?
- Our mortal enemies!
- ...He lost himself.читать дальше
- That doesn't follow up. Optimus knew Megatron.
- They were like BFFs!
- If Optimus did not know his own name, perhaps it is because the title of Prime hasn't yet been granted to him.
- Huh?
- What?
- Say again?
- With the power of the Matrix no longer within him, it would stand to reason that Optimus has reverted to his pre-Prime state: the historical archivist, Orion Pax.
- You mean, in his mind.
- Are you telling me Prime thinks he is some kind of librarian?? and a Decepticon?!
- Attention, crew. Our guest is currently in isolation, to help ease his transition. Upon Orion Pax emergence, he is to be shown every courtesy. And the first to address him as "Optimus Prime" will have their voice-box torn out.
- Lord Megatron. Is it wise, to allow an Autobot, current or former, full run of the premises?
- Nothing happens aboard this ship without my knowledge. You would do well to remember that, Airachnid. But there's no need for concern. Orion does not possess the same fight Optimus is so renown for.
- Then what use is he to our Cause?
- Ah, rest assured, Orion Pax will indeed earn his stripes.
- Welcome back to the winning team.
- Being a Decepticon is a _choice_, Agent Fowler. One I have a hard time believing Optimus would make at any point in his life.
- So, if he's riding with the 'Cons...
- ...it's because Megatron is working some kind of voodoo.
- Orion Pax may not currently be an Autobot up here, but I must believe he will never stop being one, in _here_. We must locate him to know for certain.
- Hold up. I have a chip lodged in my behind to let Uncle Sam know, would I stop for doughnuts. Are you telling me you can't just track Prime?
- Optimus's signal has not reappeared since he embarked for Earth's core. But we must get to work finding him. If we have any hope of initiating his contingency plan.
- ...contingency plan?
- What "contingency"?
- Is that even a word?
- The Key card! So, what does it do?
- It grants access to Vector Sigma, the repository of the wisdom of the Primes.
- Is that some sort of supercomputer?
- So, we can just download Optimus's memories back into him? Great! Which one is the big V? over here? somewhere in back?
- Vector Sigma is more than a "supercomputer", Jack. It is an ancient source of mystical power. On Cybertron.
- You had been a captive of the Autobots and locked in stasis for quite some time, Orion. Long enough for us to be in exodus on another world.
- Exodus? Why?
- Because the Warlord Ratchet's careless actions led to this.
- Ohh... Cybertron!
- Jackson Durby! You will NOT be travelling to another planet.
- I'm in!
- You're not going either, Miko. Not while one of you can.
- June's right. Why send a boy to do a bot's job?
- Because only a Prime can access Vector Sigma. Or one chosen by a Prime. Optimus gave the Key card to Jack. It is now imprinted with his unique biosignature.
- So, you mean Jack is like some kind of honorary Prime?
- Let's just say Jack is the only one who can return Optimus to the Autobot we knew.
- But why would Optimus willfully endanger a human? A child?
- I'm not a child, Mom!
- Maybe Optimus believes there's more to Jack than meets the eye?
- All of which is moot. The Key-card is useless to us without the means of reaching Cybertron, which we at present do not possess.
- Dude. What about _that_?
- Miko, the Ground bridge barely got them into Earth orbit, remember?
- Yeah, but Ratchet built it. Can't you just turbo-charge the thing?
- I cannot believe Ratchet capable of such horrors.
- Yes. And to think the Doctor of Doom's mad quest for power continues... His marauders pursued us to this planet's orbit. We feel its species are not ready to behold us. But we have resolved to protect this world from the same tragedy which was dealt to our own.
- One question, Megatron. Why are we called Decepticons?
- Another craven Autobot scare tactic. The name was meant to demonize us. Instead, we wear it as a badge of honour. For if speaking the truth is deception — then we are gladly guilty. Now please, Orion. There will be plenty of time for catching up. You must rest.
- Megatron! I will do my part to stop Ratchet's unspeakable crimes of aggression. This I vow. With all my Spark.
- It seems we have successfully achieved control of Orion's spark. Now, to put his mind to work. Have you sanitized the data-core? Excellent. Our new archivist would require unlimited access to our files. It would be counterproductive for him to stumble upon any sensitive information.
- Two "body slamburger" specials. Enjoy!
- Hey, Jack!
- Sierra!
- How come I never see you around?
- What are you talking about? We have chemistry together. Erm, I mean "class"! Chemistry class.
- I mean, outside of school. I never see you at any parties or at the mall.
- Well, mostly I'm here wearing the hat. And you never can study too hard for the OVCT, you know. And, there's some other... stuff. Oh. Don't go anywhere!
- Welcome to K.O. drive-in, may I take your...
- Five p.m., Jack, your shift is over. Let's go.
- Oh. _That_ kind of "stuff".
- Sierra, wait! ...She is my mother!
- Your Mom looks good in leather. On your bike.
- Did not mean to decimate your social life.
- Not the first time. Any sign of Optimus?
- Not today.
- Not yet!
- When we stormed the Iacon Hall of Records in the winning days of the war for Cybertron, we acquired highly classified files. Files written with Autobot codes which we had been not able to decypher.
- Autobot codes which the Iacon archivist Orion Pax should have no trouble cracking. Considering what's at stake, shouldn't we beef up the security around here?
- Knockout, I believe that Orion will perform most effectively if he does not feel threatened or confined in any way. However, it is no coincidence that Orion's work-station is located in direct proximity to the energon storage vault.
- Which is under constant surveillance... Well-played.
- Ratchet! Are you turbo-charging the Ground-bridge?
- Tinkering. No need to get anyone's hopes up, just yet.
- Orion! How fares project "Iacon"?
- I am a bit rusty, I fear. I've only managed to decode three entries.
- And what do these entries comprise?
- They were logged by Autobot archivist during the war after I entered stasis. My only knowledge of its content so far is that they are coordinates, targeting locations on this very planet. I surmise that they could indicate hiding places for vessels shuttled from Cybertron for safe-keeping.
- Such as historical documents or cultural artefacts?..
- My greatest fear would be weapons of mass destruction. Hidden away for later use.
- All the more reason it is essential we do everything in our power to keep said vessels from Autobot reach. We are fortunate to have you on our side, Orion Pax.
- Lord Megatron. I am puzzled by one particular finding. I have discovered several historic references to Starscream as your second-in-command. Yet I have not seen him aboard the ship.
- Sadly, Commander Starscream is dead.
- Orion has many questions. Valuable trait in an archivist but not in the Decepticon. It is a matter of time before he unravels all our fabrications and his innate sense of right and wrong rises to the surface... I only hope that Orion would complete project "Iacon" before I am forced to destroy him, once and for all.
- Ratchet! You awake? This is an emergency!
- Agent Fowler! Is it Optimus?
- It's 'Cons! They're busting into same military research lab they had two months ago.
- Another Space-bridge?
- And for all we know Optimus is riding with them.
- Roll out!
- Drop the power source!
- Aren't you missing someone?
- Ready for that bridge! We'll be sure to tell the big O you said "hello".
- Arcee!
- Scrap.
- Where's Optimus? Answer me!
- What?!
- Arcee... Allow me to welcome her aboard.
- No! If Orion so much as lays eyes on another Autobot let alone be allowed to witness its destruction, everything he currently believes will be called into question. See to it that Arcee is escorted off this ship immediately!
- Orion! Please return to your station. Lord Megatron's orders.
- I heard a commotion.
- What the?
- You weren't able to determine the Decepticons' location or if Optimus was even aboard ship?
- I... couldn't confirm.
- Bulkhead!
- What? You needed that? Only thing I need is our head honcho back!
- It's not your fault.
- If any of us needed rescuing Optimus would have found a way. I didn't. Simple as that.
- Ratchet! What happened out there? Reports indicate at least a dozen wounded. The hits on me to provide some explanation. You bots better get back together or the Pentagon would make me shut down your base.
- But, where would you go?
- Who knows. Maybe they'll ship us out to some island or fire us into space! What might be a welcome relief.
- I don't blame Fowler! Optimus would have evacuated all humans in the area before engaging the 'Cons.
- We don't actually know what Optimus would have done because he's not here!
- You're pretty good at stating the obvious, Bulk. Anything else you'd like to mention that we already know?
- Nothing I can say in front of the children.
- Hey, hey! Aren't we overlooking one positive? Nobody's talking about what the 'Cons just got their claws on.
- Yes, we managed to allow them to finally acquire a power source for their space bridge!
- And how exactly that would be a positive?
- We let them finish building their Space-bridge.
- Why? So they can bring more zombies back from Cybertron?
- No. So we can come and gear it. And use it to send ME to Cybertron.
- Wow. That's a pretty good idea.
- Oh well. If _Miko_ thinks it's a good idea...
- Nobody saying it would be easy but you've seized the Space-bridge before!
- We blew one up. That's a whole lot different drift of seizing one AND holding one.
- Bee is right. We have to find that thing first.
- Hellooo! If it's a _space_ bridge, isn't it..?
- The term "space" refers to its transport range, not its physical location. We'd been monitoring Earth orbit since the last one, we'd know if one were there.
- So, the Bridge could be somewhere right here on Earth?
- Like trying to find a servo ... in a scrapyard.
- Then maybe we better start looking.
- But the fact remains: we do not know what the Decepticons have in store for Optimus. Or if he's truly safe from harm.
- Starscream!
- That's "Commander Starscream". What's your malfunction? Lower those weapons immediately.
- I'm sorry, Sir, but Lord Megatron ordered that you be taken into custody should you ever return to the ship.
- What? Clearly, there has been a mistake.
- No! Optimus Prime?!
Ещё правки от MFwiffo, внести.
I've just finished going through the episode and the subs. There were a couple minor quibbles, but I don't think someone who wasn't looking for them would have noticed (with just one or two exceptions). Here's the full list but most of them are small.
::31 - “He’d lost more than the collective wisdom...” - It may just be me, but I’m hearing it as “He lost more than...” rather than “He’d”. Very minor issue either way.
::47 - “That doesn’t follow up.” - Arcee didn’t say “up”. She just said “That doesn’t follow.”
::1:21 - “You mean you think he’s some kind of Librarian?? and a Decepticon?!” Minor gramatical issue here, but I think the “And” would be capitalized.
::1:29 “Upon Orion Pax emergence,” - Megatron actually says “But when Orion Pax emerges,”
::2:02 “But then what use is he to our Cause?” - I’m not positive, but I don’t believe “Cause” should be capitalized.
::3:33 “But I must believe he will never stop he will being one, in _here_. Two things. THe comma after “one” is unneeded. The second part, is that a sсript thing my subtitles are having trouble reading? The dashes for _here_ I mean. It looks a little odd.
::3:43 “I have a chip lodged in my behind to let Uncle Sam know, would I stop for donuts.” It should read, “I have a chip lodged in my behind that lets Uncle Sam know when I stop for donuts.”
::4:22 “So which one’s the big V? over here? somewhere in back?” Sentences should be capitalized.
::5:18 “Jackson Durby!” Official materials spell his name “Jackson Darby.”
::5:24 “Not when one of YOU can.” She says “Not while one of YOU can.”
::5:46 “So, you mean Jack is like some kind of honorary Prime?” THis is such a minor thing I feel guilty about bringing it up, but I think Miko’s words would be best transcribed as “So, you mean Jack’s like some kinda honorary Prime?” It’s an incredibly minor difference, but the slang uses fit Miko’s character more.
::6:01 “Maybe Optimus believe there’s more to Jack than meets the eye?” Another incredibly minor one, but I don’t believe the intonation in Arcee’s voice indicates that it’s a question. I’d do without the question mark.
::6:16 “Dude, what about _that_” There’s those _things_ again.
::8:03 “Our new archivist would require unlimited access....” Megatron says “Our new archivist will require unlimited access...”
::8:22 “Hey, Jack!” I think the comma isn’t needed there.
::8:47 “And you can never study too hard for the OVCT, you know.” He actually says “And you can never study too hard for the old SATs you know.” The SATs are the US standardized testing (and totally useless).
::8:57 “Five p.m., Jack, your shift is over.” I think this would best be rendered into English as “5 PM Jack. Your shift is over.”
::9:01 _That_ kind of... “stuff.” Indeed Sierra. _That_ kind.
::9:10 “She is my mother.” Another minor one, “She’s my mother.”
::9:26 “Did not mean to decimate your social life.” Better read “Didn’t mean to...”
::9:37 “When we stormed the Iacon.... in the winning days of the war for Cybertron,” It should be, “in the waning days...”
::9:46 “Files written with Autobot codes, which we had been not able to decypher”. Decipher is spelled wrong. In addition, it should read, ...”which we had been unable to decipher.”
::10:24 “Which is under constant surveillance... Well-Played.” I believe it should read “Well played.” Without the dash.
::11:34 “Such as, historical documents or cultural artefacts?” Artifacts is misspelled.
::12:32 “Orion has many questions.” It should read, “Orion asks many questions”.
::12:36 “Valuable trait in an archivist, but not in the Decepticon.” Should be “A valuable trait in an archivist, but not in a Decepticon.”
::12:41 “It is a matter of time before he unravels all our fabrications” Should be “It is a matter of time before he unravels our fabrications”
::12:53 “I only hope that Orion would complete project Iacon” Should be “I only hope that Orion will complete project Iacon”
::13:13 “And for all we know Optimus is riding with them.” I listened to it a couple times, and I’m pretty sure Arcee says “But for all we know”
::15:34 “See to it that Arcee is escorted out of this ship immediately.” Should be “See to it that Arcee is escorted off this ship immediately.”
::17:35 “The hits on me to provide some explanation.” Fowler says “The heats on me to provide...”
::17:39 “You bots better get back together or the Pentagon would make me shut down your base.” He says “You bots better get your act together or the Pentagon will make me shut down your base.”
::17:48 “What might be a welcome relief.” Ratchet says “Wouldn’t that be a welcome relief.”
::18:31 “No. So we can come and gear it.” He’s saying “No. So we can commandeer it.”
::18:37 “Wow. That’s a pretty good idea.” Miko again. She says “Woah.” Not “wow.”
::18:41 “If _Miko_ thinks it’s a good idea.” You tell her, _Arcee_.
::18:45 “Nobody is saying it would be easy.” Jack says “Nobody is saying it will be easy.”
::18:49 “We blew one up. That’s a whole different drift of seizing AND holding one.” Oh no! Drift is trying to muscle in on Prime! Bulkhead says “That’s a whole lot different than seizing AND holding one.”
::18:55 “Bee is right.” I think “Bee’s right.”
::19:07 “And we’d been monitoring Earth orbit since the last one, we’d know if that were there.” I think there’s a couple errors here, and would be better written “And we’ve been monitoring Earth’s orbit since the last one, we’d know if it were there.
@темы: сабы, черновики, ТФП, трансформеры
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20.02.2012 в 16:32второй вариант точно) ибо первый. как бэ, не совсем правильный. хотя джек там говорит так, будто в слове стоит апостроф Т_Т
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20.02.2012 в 17:22Звезда Фомальгаут, Рэтчет =
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20.02.2012 в 19:05tata_red, рада )) раз это кому-то нужно... это приятно и мне и людям, но блин, как же тоже бывает лень и недосуг
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20.02.2012 в 20:11Можно сделать из этого текста субтитры? А также использовать этот транскрипт для собственной версии русских сабов? (естественно, с указанием твоего ника.)
Two bags of slamburger specials. Enjoy!
У меня есть половинка серии, сделанная Стормвиндом. Он тут услышал: "Two Body Slam Burger specials, enjoy!" Это типа так бургеры назывались. Закусочная именовалось "KO", вот и блюдам давались оригинальные названия.
Рэтчет = но что же он делает с Мостом? по смыслу понятно, что заряжает помощнее, но как именно Мико и Раф говорят об этом? build it up? triple-booting?
Ыыы! Я тоже так отношусь к Рэтчету
По версии Стормвинда: "Yeah, but Ratched built it. Can't you just turbocharge the thing?"
They were locked by an Autobot archivist during war after I entered stasis. My only knowledge of its content so far is that they are coordinates. Target(ing)s, locations on this very planet. I surmise that they could indicate hiding places for vessels shuttled from Cybertron for safe-keeping.
У Стормвинда: They were logged by autobot archivist during the war, after I entered stasis. My only knowledge of their content so far is that they are coordinates, targeting locations on this very planet. I surmise that they could indicate hiding places for vessels shuttled from Cybertron for safekeeping.
Our guest is currently in isolation, to help ease his transition.
Вот эта фраза у Стормвинда в знаках вопроса.
Если хочешь, могу скинуть Стормвиндов скрипт в личку. Но вроде отличий, кроме вышеувпомянутых цитат, не наблюдается.
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20.02.2012 в 20:23Да, body там слышно, но блин горелый, почему body... A slamburger-ы точно есть, их можно есть (только не в сленгово-сексуальном значении слово здесь звучит, конечно).
Turbocharge... Надеюсь, Стормвинд не обидится, если внесу его версию слова? только тут уместен дефис, на мой вкус (turbo-charge).
Logged! точно, logged 1000% Глаз замылился, вернее, ухо.
«Изолирован», скорее всего, по смыслу вполне подходит.
Прежде чем скидывать ту половинку скрипта в личку, может, нужно Стормвиндово permission?
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20.02.2012 в 20:39Я тогда буду делать для видео в формате avi. Версии видео могут отличаться.
Да, body там слышно, но блин горелый, почему body... A
Телетрон сообщает, что Body Slam - это "бросок (приём в спортивной борьбе)". У них еще были гамбургеры "super combos" в 1 серии.
Надеюсь, Стормвинд не обидится, если внесу его версию слова? <...>Прежде чем скидывать ту половинку скрипта в личку, может, нужно Стормвиндово permission?
Эээ... У меня сложилось мнение, что сей дес несколько равнодушен к сериалу. Скрипт он сделал по просьбе, о его судьбе не выражал никаких пожеланий. Но, наверное, да, лучше его лично спросить.
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20.02.2012 в 20:47Да-да, 1-ую серию ещё помню )) но спортивная борьба в 27-й, по-моему, не упоминается и не обыгрывается. Two bucks for slamburgers? тоже не то.
Буду ждать, ежели согласие выразит. А кстати, если захочет прочесть-заюзать мой транскрипт, я не против.
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20.02.2012 в 21:08Стормвинд дал согласие. Но приписал: "Я приверженец копилефта. Пока меня упоминают, как автора тгого, на чём это основано - делайте с ним что угодно=)"
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20.02.2012 в 21:15"Зашибись-заезжаловка" XDДовольно убедительная версия, игра слов!Церемонно передаю благодарности и уверение, что основываться на другом транскрипте не планирую, вот упомянуть, чьи замечания помогли, это да.
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21.02.2012 в 00:03Про дядю Сэма уже исправилось, я могу только подтвердить)
too hard for the universityole varsity - там явная аббревиатура - либо OVCT (колледж в Огайо) либо VCT - хз что.
The hits on me to provide- that't hits on me
So they can bring more soldiers back from Cybertron? - zombies
I don't believe Fowler! - I don't blame... кажется, так. Остальное вроде все в порядке)
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21.02.2012 в 01:47«Я не виню Фаулера» — now, that makes sense! а то непонятно было, о чём спор, ведь не было Оптимуса в числе нападающих на лабораторию.
И за зомбей спасибо ))
(Btw, каким образом можно передать твой ник латиницей?? нужно для комментария на англояз. ресурсе субтитров).
Uleni Xeleran, спасибо! ))) ейчас перезалью вариант новее.
Нашла ещё огрехов у себя, в частности, исправила фразу Фаулера на:
(and) they're busting into same military research lab they hit two month ago. (вместо had)
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